a 20-year old daring youth
-> a daring 20-year-old youthafter a hard working day
-> after a hard day's work
a letter in her closet which said
-> a letter in her closet. The letter said that
she had immense fortune which was
-> she had an immense fortune that was
Thus, the daring youth
-> So the daring youth
His long and extremely tedious quest for the missing sibling is highlighted by all kinds of media, newspapers in particular....
Question: Is "tedious" the word you want here? It makes the game sound dull, tiresome, and uninteresting.
Question: What does it mean for the quest to be highlighted by media?
I would suggest putting the objective here, before the rules--the what before the how. The rules have no meaning until you know what the task is.
Rules:
Rule 1: Stick to the newspaper style.
-> Stick to newspaper style.
Rule 4: Each entry should contain no less than 15 lines.
-> ...no fewer than...
Rule 5: The game lasts strictly a month.
-> The game ends after one month.
or The game lasts for one month.
or The game lasts exactly one month.
or The game has a strict time limit of one month.
The who player with most postings gains the victory
-> The player with the most postings wins.
or The player who has the most postings wins.
in the form of a short paper article.
-> in the form of a short newspaper article.
or in the form of a short news article.